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Thursday, 18 February 2016

Where does my heart lie?

Where does my heart lie?

Where the cabbage tree
in the breeze
waves a greeting at me.

Where the Te Kouka
is dancing to me
in the shady breeze.

Where  the the flowers
on the grass
do the hoola.

Where the fish swish in the pond 
showing me their tricks 
in the water.

I feel like I'm at home here.

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I am learning to use writing personification.
I am going sort of good so I think I am unistructural because I need a little help making my personification make sense for example were the cabbage tree in the breeze waves a greeting at me.
My next step is to get multistructural so l can write many examples.

4 comments:

  1. Great job Ruby you are good at use personification in your poem. You used strong words.

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  2. I love your blog because it is interesting.

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  3. I love your story Ruby.
    I liked the part when you said where the flowers on the grass do the hola.
    It makes me feel happy.

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    1. Thanks lila I like you comment and I also like your poem I had a lot of fun doing this, Ruby

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